So far I have two teachers that have gotten me to do a "get-to-know-you" assignment. Both I spent a lot of time preparing for and doing. One thing I don't like which I had to do for one assignment is brainstorming on paper. It's annoying. I know what I'm thinking, I don't need to write it down unless it's the end product.
I enjoy writing about myself but... yeah I'm too modest to write too much about me. That last sentance even took a lot out of me. And that one. And that one. And... you get the point. So anyways, these essays had killer opening paragraphs.
One was:
As you may or may not know, but I hope whoever is reading this does otherwise that’s really creepy, my name is Kory Cudmore. I was born in Peace Arch Hospital on 08/08/91. As I grew up, I realized: “Hey there are these people who are constantly in my house.” Let me introduce you to them.
And the other one was:
When I was -1 day old, my mom was rushed to Peace Arch Hospital. Then on August 8 1991, the world got a little brighter, the trees opened their eyes for the first and only time and the angels broke out into a chorus of Ode To Joy as I was born. I lay there screaming as if to eject a lung. They weighed me in at nine pounds, eleven ounces. For that I apologise to my mom. I, then was brought home to be admired and gawked at by the rest of my relatives. It was love at first sight for anyone who met me followed quickly by rejection
4 comments:
i have another friend born on 08/08... not the same year though. I will most definetely remember your birthday now.. :)
Kory Cudmore you rock my socks off! You're a great writer, and I never really knew that about you! Keep it up man!
Hey Kory,
Wazzup? You watchin Survivor this time round? Who do you want to win? Still watchin the Weather Chanel you crazy man?
tell your ma to make me tea soon......................................................:o)
I want Yao Man to win
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